Both men and women these days work full-time, so it is logical for them to share household chores equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

nowadays,

both

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men

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and

women

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have the same workload and responsibilities, so

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understandable that

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share the

household

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chores

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will discuss why agree with

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argument. Compared

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the past, or in our tradition in ancient times, In the family, only

men

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will

work

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day to day to feed

there

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families, I remember before, my mother told me that my grandmother, ask permission

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my grandfather that she want to

work

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,

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because the salary of my grandfather is not enough to feed all there families, but my grandfather

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the request of my grandmother

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because

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the tradition along time ago, but now in modern times, all

men

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and

women

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can

work

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almost in the same

job

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,

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,

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have my girl cousin, who

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work

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as a butcher in the

meatshop

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meat shop

. That

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before is only intended for

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men

,

beacuse

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because

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a hard

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, but now

women

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can do that kind of

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also

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.

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both

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men

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and

women

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should do

household

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chores

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equally.

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,

household

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chores

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nowadays

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a little bit easy. You can do

household

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chores

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very fast compared to before,

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, in the past, you only wash your clothes by hand, but now we have

washing

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a washing

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machine to wash our clothes, very fast and convenient, so really it can save you time.

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, we have

also

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gas

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range or electric

stove

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to cook our food very easily, so you

dont

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do not

need to cook using wood or charcoal,

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can cause you more time, so

both

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and

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women

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today can do and share

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chores

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very fast and

easy

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. In my conclusion,

both

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men

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nowadays, have the same

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opportunity compared to

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in our ancient times,

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why agree that

both

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men

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and

women

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have split the

household

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chores

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equally at

ther

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their

home

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,

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because

the

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they

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have the same workload.