Both men and women these days work full-time, so it is logical for them to share household chores equally. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

nowadays,

both

men

and

women

have the same workload and responsibilities, so

its

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it is

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understandable that

the

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they

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share the

household

chores

. In

this

essay,

i

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I

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will discuss why agree with

this

argument. Compared

in

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the past, or in our tradition in ancient times, In the family, only

men

will

work

day to day to feed

there

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their

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families, I remember before, my mother told me that my grandmother, ask permission

to

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my grandfather that she want to

work

,

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because the salary of my grandfather is not enough to feed all there families, but my grandfather

refuse

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the request of my grandmother

,

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because

that is

the tradition along time ago, but now in modern times, all

men

and

women

can

work

almost in the same

job

,

For example

,

i

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I

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have my girl cousin, who

work

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as a butcher in the

meatshop

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meat shop

. That

job

before is only intended for

mwn

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men

,

beacuse

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because

its

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it's

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a hard

job

, but now

women

can do that kind of

job

also

.

Therefore

both

men

and

women

should do

household

chores

equally.

On the other hand

,

household

chores

nowadays

is

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are

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a little bit easy. You can do

household

chores

very fast compared to before,

For instance

, in the past, you only wash your clothes by hand, but now we have

washing

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a washing

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machine to wash our clothes, very fast and convenient, so really it can save you time.

In addition

, we have

also

gas

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a gas

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range or electric

stove

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to cook our food very easily, so you

dont

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do not

need to cook using wood or charcoal,

that

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can cause you more time, so

both

and

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apply

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women

today can do and share

household

chores

very fast and

easy

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easily

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. In my conclusion,

both

men

and

women

nowadays, have the same

job

opportunity compared to

before

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apply

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in our ancient times,

That is

why agree that

both

men

and

women

have split the

household

chores

equally at

ther

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their

home

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,

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because

the

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they

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have the same workload.