A family member is coming to stay with you. He/she will be arriving by train in the morning, but you won’t be home until the evening. Write a letter to your relative. In your letter: – explain the arrangements you have made for them to get keys and enter the house – tell your relative how to get from the train station to your house – say when you will be home and suggest wha you could do together that evening

Dear Anthony, Hope you are doing great,

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I'm

very excited to hear that you decide to visit me here in my

apartment

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because we

hadnt

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hadn't

meet each other a long time ago, I remember the

last

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time we meet is we are in our 1st year in college, and now we are both working. But

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have a problem, I have

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and

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important meeting in the office very urgently, so

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cannot fetch you

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the train station,

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will be home after 6

oclock

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o'clock

in the evening If you reach

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the train station, there are many taxi

driver

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drivers

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, parking outside tell the driver where you want to go, and he drive you to my

apartment

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, our village is quite popular here so almost all

driver

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no my place. When you arrive, knock

the

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door of that other

apartment

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next to mine, the name of the owner of that

apartment

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is George, tell him that we are

cousin

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so he can give you my key. Wait for me, tell

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me i

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come home,

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will bring you to one of the famous

restaurant

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here to eat dinner. Excited to see you again. Your cousin, Rubenel

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Mar 8, 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

195 words

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