The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton

The line graph demonstrates the proportion of

tourists

to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton,

Art

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the Art

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Gallery,

Pavilion

,

Pier

,

Festival

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and Festival

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throughout the period from 1980 to 2010.

It is clear that

the

percentage

visiting

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of visiting

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Pier

and

Pavilion

surged during the period,

while

the number of

visitors

to the other attractions declined.

Expecially

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Especially

,

Pavilion

has the highest

percentage

of travellers. In 1980, there were only 10%

tourists

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of tourists

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to England went to Brighton

Pier

,

while

the figure for

visitors

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who visitted

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visitted

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visited

the

Pavilion

was nearly 2.5 times as high

as

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apply

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. At

Pier

, the

amount

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number

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of travellers fluctuated from 1980 to 2000,

then

rose gradually to 21% in 2010.

By contrast

, the

percentage

of

visitors

went

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who went

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to

Pavilion

rocketed

dramtically

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dramatically

to reach a peak of almost 50% in 2010 and became the highest destination attractive to

tourists

. The most popular Brighton attraction in 1980 for

visitors

to England was

Festival

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the Festival

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.

Festival

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The Festival

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had the highest proportion of

tourists

at 30%, compared to only 20% of

tourists

visitting

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visiting

Art

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the Art

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Gallery. The proportion of travellers rose slightly to 37% in 1985. Over the next 25 years,

this

decreased sharply to only 9%,

beinf

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being

the lowest

atractive

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attractive

destination among 4

attraction

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attractions

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in 2010. Apart from Art Gallery, the

percentage

of people who travelled

in

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to

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the Festival remained quite stable,

declined

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declining

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modestly by only 2% in 2010.