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The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton
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The line graph demonstrates the proportion of
tourists
 to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton,
Art
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the Art
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 Gallery,
Pavilion
,
Pier
,
Festival
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and Festival
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 throughout the period from 1980 to 2010.
It is clear that
 the
percentage
visiting
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of visiting
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Pier
 and
Pavilion
 surged during the period,
while
 the number of
visitors
 to the other attractions declined.
Expecially
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Especially
,
Pavilion
 has the highest
percentage
 of travellers. In 1980, there were only 10%
tourists
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of tourists
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 to England went to Brighton
Pier
,
while
 the figure for
visitors
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who visitted
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visitted
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visited
 the
Pavilion
 was nearly 2.5 times as high
as
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apply
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. At
Pier
, the
amount
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number
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 of travellers fluctuated from 1980 to 2000,
then
 rose gradually to 21% in 2010.
By contrast
, the
percentage
 of
visitors
went
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who went
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 to
Pavilion
 rocketed
dramtically
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dramatically
 to reach a peak of almost 50% in 2010 and became the highest destination attractive to
tourists
. The most popular Brighton attraction in 1980 for
visitors
 to England was
Festival
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the Festival
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.
Festival
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The Festival
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 had the highest proportion of
tourists
 at 30%, compared to only 20% of
tourists
visitting
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visiting
Art
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the Art
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 Gallery. The proportion of travellers rose slightly to 37% in 1985. Over the next 25 years,
this
 decreased sharply to only 9%,
beinf
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being
 the lowest
atractive
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attractive
 destination among 4
attraction
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attractions
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 in 2010. Apart from Art Gallery, the
percentage
 of people who travelled
in
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to
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 the Festival remained quite stable,
declined
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declining
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 modestly by only 2% in 2010.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, pavilion, pier, percentage, visitors with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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