The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagram illustrates the proportions of use of four sorts of electricity generation in five Asian countries in 2005.
Overall
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, Malaysia and Singapore share similar data, using the most proportion of coal and lignite.
In contrast
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, petrol products, hydro and wind, and nuclear are the primary fuel sources for Thailand, South Korea, and Japan, respectively. It is evident from the chart that coal and lignite is the most significant consuming fuel in Malaysia and Singapore, at 61% and 42%, respectively.
Moreover
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, these two countries used the second high amount of nuclear at 19% and 13%, respectively.
In contrast
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, Thailand used the highest proportions of electricity generation in petroleum products, which was 36%,
whereas
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other nations just used
this
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fuel approximately 3%.
Moreover
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, nearly half of the power comes from hydro and wind in South Korea,
whereas
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nuclear
also
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plays a significant role, at 33%. Japan used almost half the portion, and South Korea had one-third of the part in nuclear.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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