The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
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The pie chart below illustrates the
food
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budget
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and the average family expenditures on
restaurant
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meals
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in various
years
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,
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the graph compares the
number
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of
meals
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eaten in fast
food
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restaurants or sit-down restaurants.
Overall
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, the percentage of home cooking decreased through the
years
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to be equal to the percentage of the
food
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budget
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spent on
restaurant
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meals
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in 2015.
while
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,
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apply
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fast
food
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meals
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increased dramatically to 90 overstepping the sit-down
restaurant
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meals
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in 2010. Looking into more details, in 1985, the majority of people relied on home cooking, and only 10% spent their
food
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budget
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on
restaurant
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meals
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. In 1995,
this
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proportion increased slightly to 15%. After 10
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, the proportion of expenditure on
restaurant
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meals
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saw a notable increase, accounting for 35%. More rise was seen in the proportion of
food
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budget
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spent on
restaurant
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meals
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until it became equal to home cooking. Now moving to the graph, in 1980, the
number
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of fast
food
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meals
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and sit-down
restaurant
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meals
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was both 20. The former rose slightly to 28
meals
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,
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the latter increased significantly to 35
meals
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in 1990.
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, the
number
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of fast
food
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meals
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grew quickly through the
years
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until it reached 90
meals
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per year in 2010.
while
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,
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the
number
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of sit-down
restaurant
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meals
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kept expanding gradually accounting for 44
meals
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per year in 2010.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, budget, restaurant, meals, years, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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