The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the pie chart compares the
percentage
of five types of
books
sold by a bookseller in 1972,1992 and 2012. adults
fiction
books
increased dramatically from 1972 to 2012 in these types. but the
percentage
of biography declined significantly. the
percentage
of adults
fiction
in 1972 was 20% which same as the
percentage
of biography, but in the next 40 years, the account of adult
fiction
increased dramatically up to 45% ,
conversely
, the biography fell to 8 % in 2012 ,and the adult
fiction
was the highest accounted among the other four types
books
. travel
books
accounted for 15% in 1972 which grew slowly from 1972 to 1992,and declined to 10% in 2012.meanwhile the
percentage
of children's
fiction
books
showed a slight increase from 20% in 1972 to 25 % in 2012. but only one type consistently showed a downward trend.
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