Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do. How far do you agree?
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In
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, some individuals think that jobs like medical staff,doctors and teachers are underrated and should be paid as high as heads of companies or celebrities. The reason is Correct your spelling
globalisation
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are
much longer than Change the verb form
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the actor
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get
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gets
other
professions. From my personal point of view, I agree with the statement aforementioned above as Change preposition
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these
professionals
play an important role than celebrities in the nation. This
essay will discuss my view and thus
will lead to a logical conclusion.
Supporting my agreement to
the given statement, there are many professions in our society, which are mandatory for us to maintain a functional community. Change preposition
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For example
, doctors help patients to overcome their health problems and more crucial is they are saving other people
life. Change noun form
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On the other hand
, teachers also
play an important role in educate
students about maths, sciences and other fields that Change the verb form
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turns
out to be beneficial in their future life. Correct subject-verb agreement
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Therefore
, it is vital to increase their salary due to
their major contributions in
the country.
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favor
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my
agreement is teachers and doctors spend more time studying rather than actors or celebrities. Change preposition
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However
, communities nowadays are not interested on
the effort of these Change the preposition
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professionals
, in fact
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on something that Replace the word
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interest
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interests
such
as entertainment. Therefore
, these professionals
should be paid more and reward
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them
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apply
on
every achievement that they had achieved.
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for
To conclude
, workers like nurses, Correct word choice
and doctor
doctor
should not be undervalued by Fix the agreement mistake
doctors
the
society as they are the reason we are here. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
, the government should motivated
people to value these Change the verb form
motivate
professionals
and increase their salary
in the future.Fix the agreement mistake
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