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In som countries,it is common practice for young people (13-17yrs) to get a part time job in the summer.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of teenage employment.

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In
this
 contemporary world,young adults have the ability to practice doing part-time
work
 during the summer.
However
,the question is how can the part-time job impact children's lives to become
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.
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A growing number of
people
 believe that kids are learning about earning
money
 and gain dependence from doing part-time job in any way it
also
 led to drawbacks aspect that has to be taken into account.
Firstly
,one benefit of children doing a part-time job is that contributes to learn them the value of
money
.
for example
,if they are doing hard
work
 at an early age and got
money
 for that,they will definitely sense important learning keeping the
money
.
consequently
,in the future they are going to be more credible and sensible peoples.
Additionally
,the positive of
this
 situation is young adults are able to learn how is managing their
money
 in useful ways.
for instance
,if they would have something important,they will probably manage their expenses carefully.
As a result
,they will be more dependable and responsible ready to enter society.
Moreover
,one problem when children do part-time
work
 they are might exploit by negative
people
 in a damaged style.
for example
,teenagers might become mean to spread drugs without any idea of the big problem ,if they
work
 with harmful
people
.
consequently
,it is going to cause destruction in society.Another possible issue is that they got cheated to do hard manual
work
.
for instance
,teenagers really want to offer their needs,but might to got cheated by someone.
As a result
,young adults feel exhausted and tired from
this
work
 and couldn't focus on their studying. In conclusion,
Although
 young
people
 are going to have new experiences in their life by doing part-time
work
,there are
also
 downsides that are going to hurt them.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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