You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The following bar chart shows the rates of how much
time
parents
in one country spend looking after their kids in the evening in 2022.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that mothers have the highest percentage of dressing children while
fathers have the lowest rate in the same category. Both parents
together were spending many hours playing games and preparing the kids for bed. Unfortunately, mothers and fathers separately do not spend a lot of time
playing with their children.
On the other hand
, children’s moms help them do their homework for 50 percent
of their Change the spelling
per cent
time
, whereas
fathers sadly do not spend that much time
as they only spend 10 percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
time
. Preparing for bed is a task which parents
do together 50 percent
of the Change the spelling
per cent
time
. However
, it is equally important to recognise that mothers have roughly the same percentage as both parents
of preparing children for bed which is just above 40 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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