You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care

their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting

the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The following bar chart shows the rates of how much
time
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parents
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in one country spend looking after their kids in the evening in 2022.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that mothers have the highest percentage of dressing children
while
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fathers have the lowest rate in the same category. Both
parents
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together were spending many hours playing games and preparing the kids for bed. Unfortunately, mothers and fathers separately do not spend a lot of
time
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playing with their children.
On the other hand
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, children’s moms help them do their homework for 50
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percent
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of their
time
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,
whereas
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fathers sadly do not spend that much
time
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as they only spend 10
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of the
time
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. Preparing for bed is a task which
parents
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do together 50
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percent
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of the
time
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.
However
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, it is equally important to recognise that mothers have roughly the same percentage as both
parents
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of preparing children for bed which is just above 40
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, parents, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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