The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of
households
in owned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, in England and Wales house owners in 1918 were really a few
percentages
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percentage
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of people (above 20 per
cent
) but at
this
time
households
in rented apartments were in huge numbers (under 80 per
cent
) . In 1971 , both
household's
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household
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percentages become equal but in 2011
households
in owned houses increased respectively and
households
in rented accommodation fell dramatically. For the
start
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20 per
cent
of
households
increased to 50 per
cent
in 1971 and become the same as
households
in rented accommodation but
this
percentage started to raise up in 2001 to 69 per
cent
,
however
,
this
percentage
feel
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fell
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to 63 in 2011.
Households
in rented houses were under 80 per
cent
and decreased dramatically to 32 per
cent
in 2001. in 2011
this
numbers
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number
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also
fell to 20 per
cent
.
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