The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of

households

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in owned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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, in England and Wales house owners in 1918 were really a few

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of people (above 20 per

cent

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) but at

this

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time

households

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in rented apartments were in huge numbers (under 80 per

cent

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) . In 1971 , both

household's

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percentages become equal but in 2011

households

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in owned houses increased respectively and

households

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in rented accommodation fell dramatically. For the

start

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20 per

cent

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households

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increased to 50 per

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in 1971 and become the same as

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in rented accommodation but

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percentage started to raise up in 2001 to 69 per

cent

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however

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percentage

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to 63 in 2011.

Households

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in rented houses were under 80 per

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and decreased dramatically to 32 per

cent

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in 2001. in 2011

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numbers

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also

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fell to 20 per

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

156 words

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