The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart below illustrates the percentage of
households
in owned and rented houses in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.
Overall
, in England and Wales house owners in 1918 were really a few percentages
of people (above 20 per Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
cent
) but at this
time households
in rented apartments were in huge numbers (under 80 per cent
) . In 1971 , both household's
percentages become equal but in 2011 Change noun form
household
households
in owned houses increased respectively and households
in rented accommodation fell dramatically.
For the start
20 per Add a comma
,start
cent
of households
increased to 50 per cent
in 1971 and become the same as households
in rented accommodation but this
percentage started to raise up in 2001 to 69 per cent
, however
, this
percentage feel
to 63 in 2011.
Correct your spelling
fell
Households
in rented houses were under 80 per cent
and decreased dramatically to 32 per cent
in 2001. in 2011 this
numbers
Fix the agreement mistake
number
also
fell to 20 per cent
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