The chart below gives information about how people aged25-34 are housedin the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

This

is a bar chart that showed that people aged 25 to 34 are housed in the UK.

First,

the horizontal axis showed

years

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the years

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from 2004 to 2014 and the vertical axis showed

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the percent

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percent

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per cent

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of households aged 25 to 34. Now, turning to the details, in 2004 the data of

home

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homeowners

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owners

peaked, but the

renters

were only about 20%. Between

in

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2004 to 2008, the

home

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homeowners

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owners

were slowly decrease

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were slowly decreased

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, but

renters

moderately went up. From 2009, the

home

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homeowners

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owners

began sharply decline unit 2014,

nevertheless

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the

home

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homeowners

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owners

only

were

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less

40

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than 40

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%. The

renters

began dramatically climbing

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in

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2014.

On the contrary

, the

renters

to top about more than 45% in 2014. In 2011 and 2012, the data of

home

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homeowners

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owners

was similar

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the

renters

.

However

, The data of

renters

were over the

home

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homeowners

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owners

in 2013. In

conclusion

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this

bar chart occurred haw people aged 25 - 24 are housed in the UK.