The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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Overall
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, it is visible from the given view that there will be many differences in the
future
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, especially the changes related to factories and housing in the
town
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of Norbitton. Concerning the current position of the
town
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, there are eight factories around a roundabout with paths on the west and the south sides of the
city
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, which are being removed in the
future
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.
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, a river flows straight toward it, and it will be easy to cross in the
future
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. For
future
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planning of the
town
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of Norbiton, there are expecting many changes regarding the later position of the
city
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.
First,
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there will be a bridge over the river connected with the road, which was part of the roundabout on the
city
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's south side.
Secondly
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, in the south part of
town
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, there is going to build a new road with a roundabout again. Between the roundabouts, there is a concern about making a medical centre and shops.
Then
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on the
city
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's east side, they plan to construct a school and playground.
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, around the
town
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, there
are
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going to be many housings across.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words future, town, city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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