Nowadays companies and other organizations are requiring their employees to wear a uniform. Think about jobs where uniform is important. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exaples from your own knowledge or experience.

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dressing become an essential part of the
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value culture.
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,a larger number of
companies
expect their members
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a
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standard
dressing
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such
as females
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skirts with huge heeled shoes and
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with
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suit
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,
others
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management
think
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that dressing
with
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formal
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or
informal
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is
no
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a big deal.
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me
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,I believe both formats would have their benefits and drawbacks.
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of all,formal dressing
companies
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to their
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. That seems would be
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professional services and reliable products.
Additionally
, these standards would
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up
companies
reputation. Most
of
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organisations
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management believe that
employee's
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dressing
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,
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and working efficiency equal importance. That would represent
companies
culture and background.
Athought
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,some of their employees have little
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with
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compulsory requirements.
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, numerous insurance
companies
require their employees to wear
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uniform
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uniforms
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to explore new customers as that can attract
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eyesights
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,
that
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can serve professional services
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first
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meet
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time.
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,
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,flats and jeans are
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good friends with which one no need to follow any standards
dressing
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.
Neverless
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Nevertheless
to say that these causal wears would be more comfortable and help to speed up staffs job duty.
Hence
, they can work in a
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environments
and
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stressless
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.
Overall
,I
belive
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that communication would be
best
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way
to
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both
organations
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organizations
and their members.
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companies
to
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make
decide
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and consider their employees
first
. In my
views
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, if would allow their staff
dressing
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to dress
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informal
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informally
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in some special circumstances will be
win win
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situation.
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