The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph provided shows the consumption of fast food by Australian Teenagers in the period 1950 until 2010.
Overall
, pizza and hamburgers showed a climbing pattern over the years,
however
,
fish
and
chips
illustrate a decreasing line. Hamburgers showed a drastic increase from 1975 till 1985 with changes in utilization from 10
times
eaten per year by teenagers roses to approximately 85
times
. Later, the popularity of hamburgers gradually climbed to 100
times
in 2000. Pizza
also
has the similarity traits where it shows an increase in consumption by youngsters from 5 to 85
times
. On other hand,
fish
and
chips
illustrate a fluctuating pattern which is the opposite trait compared to other fast food.
Fish
and
chips
declined from 100
times
to around 85
times
in 1980 and
then
climbed to 95 in the following 5 years. Later on,
fish
and
chips
go trough slumped to approximately 40
times
in 2000.
Hence
,
this
ends the reports.
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