The charts Below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the word. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relevant.
The pie charts give information about the consumption of
water
for different targets in North America
, South America
, Europe, Africa, Central Asia
and South East Asia
.
Overall
, it can be seen from the pie charts that most of the water
is used for agriculture and for industrial applying than for housing needs such
as cleaning the house or cooking in all countries which are given there.
A significant proportion of the water
usage employed for agriculture in Central Asia
and South East Asia
, Africa and South America
, precisely at 88, 84, 81, and 71 per cent; however
, inhabitants who live in other countries tend to use water
more economically so that there are
the proportion of usage is under a two fifth.
Change the verb form
is
As a result
, in countries where water
applied
less for agriculture Add a missing verb
is applied
such
as Europe and North America
, use it for industrial needs, at under a
half, Correct article usage
apply
while
in other states the employing water
for this
purpose can not reach even 10 per cent. The least of water
consumed for domestic goals and in South America
, Europe and Noth America
people applying the percentage is under a fifth, whereas
in other states it is under than 10 per cent.Submitted by zbirliknur01 on
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