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The pie charts show the comparison of different kind of energy consumption of the UK in two years.

The pie charts show the comparison of different kind of energy consumption of the UK in two years.
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The pie chart compares the consumption of various kinds of
energy
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 in the UK in two
years
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.
Overall
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, the production of Gas and Coal has slightly changed through the
years
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,
while
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 there's a remarkable switch in
percentage
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the percentage
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 of the others types of
energy
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. Looking into more details, in 1995, the UK relied the most on Gas and coal production, the percentage of both was similar with a 0,27% difference, and after 10
years
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, the proportion of both increased slightly accounting for 30,31% for Gas and 30,93% for Coal.
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 is followed by the production of Petro which remained in third place in both
years
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,
however
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, it decreased from 29,27% to 19,55% between 1995 and 2005. The UK in 2005 relied more on the consumption of nuclear
energy
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 which saw a notable increase from 6,40% to 10,10%. In conclusion, the consumption of different kinds of
energy
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 has changed after 10
years
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 and there was more dependency on other types of
energy
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 in 2005 (9,10%).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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