The diagrams below show the development of small fishing village its surrounding area into a large European tourist resort.

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The diagram illustrates the changes that occurred in a small fishing

village

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and its surrounding area and transformed it into a large European tourist resort.

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, so many things changed in

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area from buildings arriving to the population. Looking into more details, in 1974,the fishing

village

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was directly surrounded by olives, woodland behind it there was

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a small

village

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, a

village

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with sheep and goats was located in the far north of the fishing

village

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. Now moving to 2004, the fishing

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flourished with hotels

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and beaches, and it remained to contain homes of locals.

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, a new road has been constructed west of the

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, leading to the neighbouring

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, which stopped using sheep and goats.

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road leads

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to the far mountains. The woodland was replaced by a golf course, and it became surrounded by hotels and several buildings in front of the beach. The

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behind it

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contains now tourist shops.

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, in 2004, agriculture was not only limited to olives, fruit and vegetables were

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planted for the hotel's use. In conclusion,

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this

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development, the population

also

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increased becoming 80000 and 50000 tourist beds.

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, the boats and the harbour are replaced with beaches.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, in addition".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

206 words

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

Some people believe that countries should produce all the food necessary to feed their populations and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of Money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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