The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart shows the online shopping 10% and became the least amount of
sales
in Canada in two different years: 2010 and 2005.
In brief, sales
for electronics and appliances was
more than any other sector in both given years.
In 2005 electronics sale was 35% which was the dominant sector that Change the verb form
were
year
while
the second one was home furnishig
, in 2010 Correct your spelling
furnishing
furnishings
however
, the percentage of food and beverages sales
went as high as 32% while
the number
of electronics dropped slightly to 30% and thus
, sales
of food and beverages became the highest sector that year
.
The least number
of sales
in the first year
was the
18% video games but that Correct article usage
apply
number
increased dramatically to 23% in 2010 while
the number
of sales
for home furnishings was 25% in 2005 but decreasedChange preposition
by
sale
in the Fix the agreement mistake
sales
year
2010.Submitted by mehrafarin084 on
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