Some people say that protecting the environment is the government's responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believe that protecting the

environment

is the

government

’s responsibility.

However

,

other

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others

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trust that everyone has a

responsible

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on

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for

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the

environment

.

This

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essay I will discuss both points of

views

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. On the one hand, the

government

plays an important role in maintaining the

environment

and safety. Most of

pollution

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the pollution

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is created by big enterprises and factories. Only the

government

has the ability and force to restrict them to control

pollutions

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pollution

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.

For example

, the

government

sets up laws to encourage factories to move to the countryside rather than stay in the community.

This

helps to protect

urban

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the urban

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area

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areas

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from toxic gas produced by

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the plant

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plant

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and discharged

to

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the atmosphere.

Thus

, the

government

has a

responsible

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on

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for

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environment

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the environment

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.

On the other hand

, there is no doubt that individuals play an important role in protecting their surroundings. Our

behaviors

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seriously impact

on

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our society. For

instant

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, cars are concerned to be a major reason for air pollution. It

related

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is related

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to cars

discharge

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discharging

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gas to contaminate the air which

increase

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increases

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the carbon dioxide level.

Therefore

, people reduce to drive their

car

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cars

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and more use

the

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apply

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public transportation would

have

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some

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benefit

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benefits

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to protect

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the climate. In conclusion, the

government

’s duty protects citizens’ living

environment

besides

protecting our

environment

is a civic responsibility. In my opinion, I believe that the

government

and

public

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act an important obligation

on

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to

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the

environment

. It is not a single one of the participants

can

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that can

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be dispensed with.