The diagram below give information about manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The figures illustrate what a fish pie contains and what the manufacturing

process

consists

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Overall

, it can be seen that the final product is put in a microwaveable container which is very useful, and the main ingredients are peas, fish, sauce and potato. The

process

is linear and complicated because of the high number of stages and

also

, involves some employers. First of all,

potatoes

are cleaned, peeled and sliced.

Then

potatoes

are ready to be boiled and later chilled so they can be stored in another line just under

this

one. In

this

fist

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passage,

potatoes

pass through six phases during a period that could be required up to a month and it is only the beginning. Fresh

salmon

is delivered at the facility and once arrived at the production line, the

process

will not be longer than 12 hours, maybe to save the

salmon

freshness. Lemon Juice and salt are added

on

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salmon

which

pass

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passes

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through

steam

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the steam

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oven, at that

point

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two workers remove skin and bones which are put in

a

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waste disposal, during

this

process

an Inspect is present. Peas, sauces and

potatoes

that were prepared before are added

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the

salmon

and

finally

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the product is ready to be wrapped. In the

last

phase

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the item is

freezed

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frozen

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and ready to be dispatched

in

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various supermarkets.