Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools.other,however, believe that boy and girls benefits more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In our society, these days
boys
and girls
have to deal with each other in schools
, work and the outside world perhaps. So, in my opinion mixed schools
are the better option.
On the one hand, some people think that it is better to educate both
genders in separate schools
. This
has some benefits, because it will lead them to concentrate more and do a good work when they are separated. For example
: during lessons the number of the students will be less, so its more convenient for the teacher to communicate with a class full of girls
. In addition
, girls
can be more comfortable when surrounded with an environment full of girls
. As well as
for boys
, sometimes the teaching technique may be different or the way they interact with each other.
On the other hand
, there are others who think that boys
and girls
benefits more from studying in a mixed school
. This
leads to a more open minded society, because they both
learn how to talk and communicate with each other in a more respectful way. Such
as: some classes in school
has group work assignments, so this
helps the both
genders to be more friendly together. Which will lead them to build a healthy relationship in the future.
In conclusion, nowadays there are mixed schools
and separate schools
for girls
and boys
, both
are made for some different opinions and what families prefer more, whether to let their children study in mixed educating school
or in a separate school
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