The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of
males
and females
age
brackets who exercise daily in 2010.
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that in the
age
group
of 45 to 54 years old women did the highest participation,
while
men in their youngest
age
did the greatest amount of physical work.
Moreover
, in all the
age
brackets women participated higher than men except in the 15 to 24 years old
group
. Looking at the graph, it can be clearly seen that in the 15 to 24
age
the participation of women was 47.7% ,
although
it rose moderately to 53.3% in the
age
group
of 45 to 54;
however
, it declined over the passing
age
to 47.1% in the 65 and above
age
group
.
In contrast
, regarding
males
, the percentage of
males
in the youngest
age
group
was higher than any other
age
bracket, at 52.8%.
Furthermore
, it was the only
group
in which there were higher
males
than females doing exercise daily,
whereas
the Men participation rate fell to its lowest among 35 to 44 years old, at 39.5%, before rising gradually to 46.7% in the 65 and over
age
bracket.
This
rate was very close to the figure for females in the same
group
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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