Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There seems to be a common agreement that

women

are better at taking care of children compared to

men

and

thus

they should put more time and energy into baby

caring

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. I totally disagree with

this

statement and I believe that

women

should be viewed equally with

men

in work and life scare. It is easy to understand why many people hold the view that

women

are bound to take on more household duties. On one hand ,it is partly influenced by the tradition of China that when

men

go out to hunt for food and earn money,

women

mostly take care of children and elders or do some fabrications. Even now,our society is holding

this

ridiculous point more or less

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and does not count on

women

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some big family affairs.

On the other hand

,

men

are to be obliged

due to

the lack of responsibilities

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child caring ,posing much pressure on their wives, which not only harms their bodies

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but

also

destorys

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destroys

women

's careers. I completely believe that

women

should pursue what they want freely either a close baby relationship or giant work achievements. With civilization progressing, it is time to give equality between

women

and

men

, mother and father. Only when both of them make their biggest effort , society can get

further

and balanced development. What's more, it is recognized that

women

are more excel in some areas than

men

,

such

as guiding and consulting, as they give the needers a sense of belief and safety. If mothers put nearly every effort into babies and families, it will result in a big waste of gifts and talents of them. Regarding

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the division of childcare, I think it should be completely discussed in the family and adopt a reasonable method with guarantees both work and responsibilities for

chidren

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children

. In conclusion,

while

women

seem to be better at child raring, it is both sides' responsibility on the topic of

this

and mothers should have the right to decide whether they are at home or in

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