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Some people prefer to live in a house while other feel that living in an apartment has more advantages. Discuss Advantage and disadvantages

#people #house #apartment #advantage
The discussion about the accommodation issue is becoming overwhelmingly popular among the
poblic
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public
.
According to
 some,
people
 ought to live in
house
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a house
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,
other
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while other
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people
belive
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believe
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 that there are more
advantages
 for citizens living in apartments. In my opinion,
apartment
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apartments
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 and houses
are
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apply
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both have
advantages
 and disadvantages aspects. On the one hand, it is no doubt that living in a
house
 has varieties of benefits, larger space is one of them.
For example
, it is suitable for a large number of family members to live in the
house
, which could provide a yard with
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 space for children to activities and for adults to rest.
However
, living in the
house
 may cause some problems,
such
 as there
are
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being
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 a lot of insects in the
house
 and it is difficult for owners to clean, which could occur some health problems.
In addition
, most houses are located in the
surburb
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suburb
suburbs
 of the city, which are
diffcult
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difficult
 for citizens to contact the inner city if they have no private
viechles
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vehicles
.
On the other hand
,
people
 living in apartments may appreciate the
advantages
,
for instance
, it is convenient for
people
 to bond relationships with their
neighborhoods
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neighbourhoods
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. To be more specific, because the distance of each apartment is quite near,
people
 have more
opportunity
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opportunities
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 to communicate with each
neighbor
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neighbour
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 and help each other when
people
 require help.
Nevertheless
, the truth is that apartment has worse sound
isulation
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insulation
isolation
 between each room, which is a serious issue for the
people
 who are
surffing
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suffering
surfing
 from the
noisy
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noise
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. In
conxlusion
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conclusion
, with the reason
expained
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explained
 above, I agree that apartments and houses
are
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both have their
advantages
 and drawbacks, because of these two different varieties of spaces and
location
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locations
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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