The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram demonstrates the process of creating electricity to supply the nation in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall
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,
this
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is a complicated process with various steps, commencing with reserving
water
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at a high-level
reservoir
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to flow
water
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to generate electricity during the day and culminating with pumping
water
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from the low-level
reservoir
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to the high-level
reservoir
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at night. In the first stage of the process,
water
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from the river is held in the high-level
reservoir
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with the Dam.
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, there is an intake behind the
reservoir
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that opens to allow
water
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to flow through before these flow spines the turbines to operate the generator,
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generate power and supply from power lines to the national grid. All the above stages are taken place during the day.
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this
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, during the night,
water
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spinning the turbines at dat is reserved in the low-level
reservoir
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,
then
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flows in the opposite direction, through turbines and pump into high-level
reservoir
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. After that, the intake closed to keep
water
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in the high-level
reservoir
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, reservoir with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • turbine
  • generate electricity
  • transmit
  • low-level reservoir
  • high-level reservoir
  • dam
  • cycle of electricity production
  • energy storage
  • flowing water
  • sustainability
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