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Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time job and see it is a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.

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It's always good to try new things to do from a young age.
Teenagers
 who have a part-time
job
 seem to be more flexible
while
 dealing with them and they are really good
in
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 time management. I strongly agree with
this
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 idea, that some countries encourage
teenagers
 to have a part-time
job
. On the first hand, it is a good thing because when working from a young age, the teen will learn how to be more dependent and learn a lot of different skills related to their work.
For example
, the teen will be professional in communication skills, because he or she definitely dealt with a whole range of people.
In addition
, by working the teen will get more experience from a young age
also
, it will help them to take the correct choice of many things in their lives and to know what are their preferences before going to college.
On the other hand
, there are some people who dislike the idea of working in a part-time
job
 for
teenagers
. Somehow others think that studying is the most important thing for a teenager to do and to focus more on
school
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the school
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 to get into a better
job
 in the future
such
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as, when
teenagers
 graduate school with a high degree, they will be having
the
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 greater chance for a better
job
. In conclusion, people's opinions differ from one to another about encouraging
teenagers
 to have a part-time
job
,
while
 some countries encourage teens about working, by giving them the best opportunity.
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