The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second  chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons  where relevant.
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There are two charts; one represents how energy is utilized in the average home in Australia and the other illustrates
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gases emitted from
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use of electricity.
Overall
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, we can see that heating the home and
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make up the vast majority of power consumption,
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the highest
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gas emissions come from ‘other devices’ and
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heating. For power utilization, warming the home comprises nearly half of the total and heating
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makes up nearly a third. The next significant category is ‘other appliances’ with 15%, and refrigeration, cooling and lighting make up just over a tenth of the combined total.
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, heating only produces 15%
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of
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the total
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gases,
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heating remains at around a third. Another significant difference between the two pie charts is ‘other appliances’, which causes over a quarter of emissions. The remaining three categories make up exactly a quarter of all
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emissions combined.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words greenhouse, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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