The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the ratio of employees who are unavailable to work in a ten-year period from the
Netherlands
, France
, Sweden
, the UK
and Germany
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen from the graph that Sweden
, Netherlands
and France
had a significant fluctuation while
UK
and Germany
remained slightly changed.
Glancing at the chart reveals that in the first three-year, the Netherlands
had a remarkable growth with under 5.00 in 1991 then
rose to approximately 5.50 in 1993 while
France
, Sweden
and UK
increased marginally with about 5.10; 3.10 and 2.40 respectively. Next,
the percentage of employees in France
surpassed the proportion of workers in Sweden
with about 4.20 in 1993 then
dropped drastically to 3.20 in 1996 for France
and 3.00 gained negligibly to 3.20 for Sweden
.
Another notable point is that the Netherlands
had dramatically fallen from 5.50 to 4.20 in 1993 and 1996 while
UK
and Germany
remained unchanged. Subsequently
, Netherlands
and Sweden
had significant climbs with 4.2 and 3.2 to 5.4 and 4.7 respectively at the end
of the survey. Sweden
, UK
and Germany
had a slight fluctuation in the next five-year period.Submitted by linhpg259 on
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