The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration depicts the

process

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of the production of

sugar

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from

sugar

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cane.

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, the

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of extracting

sugar

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is complex including various stages. To start the

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, we need to plant

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cane, it takes 12-18 months until it

grow

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, afterwards, we harvest them,

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stage can be done manually or by a specific machine. Now the

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begin

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, in order to have the

juice

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, the

sugar

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cane should be crushed by a machine.

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, the

juice

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is purified using a limestone filter. The purified

juice

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is heated by an

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evaporator

evaporate

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at

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and at

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the end of

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stage, the

juice

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transform

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into syrup. The syrup

contain

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sugar

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, in order to have its

sugar

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, a

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of centrifugation should be done.

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, the

sugar

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extracted, is dried and cooled.   In conclusion, the

process

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of manufacturing

sugar

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required a lot of steps and machines until it

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done

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.