The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The illustration depicts the

process

of the production of

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Overall

, the

process

of extracting

sugar

is complex including various stages. To start the

process

, we need to plant

sugar

cane, it takes 12-18 months until it

grow

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, afterwards, we harvest them,

this

stage can be done manually or by a specific machine. Now the

process

begin

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, in order to have the

juice

, the

sugar

cane should be crushed by a machine.

Then

, the

juice

is purified using a limestone filter. The purified

juice

is heated by an

evaporater

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evaporator

evaporate

,

at

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the end of

this

stage, the

juice

transform

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into syrup. The syrup

contain

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sugar

, in order to have its

sugar

, a

process

of centrifugation should be done.

Lastly

, the

sugar

extracted, is dried and cooled.   In conclusion, the

process

of manufacturing

sugar

required a lot of steps and machines until it

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done

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did

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.