You Are due to give a talk to you through about the danger of smoking, but you cannot now do so. Write a letter to the youth group leader, explain that you cannot come. Apologise for your absence. Suggest a new occasion.

Dear Mr Smith, I am Dr John from the city hospital, Green Road Street. I am writing to you with regards please accept my sincere apology for being unable to give a speech on upcoming Monday at the youth group.
, I am informing you that on upcoming Monday, 22nd March 2023,there is a meeting scheduled for all the senior doctors, which is very important for all the doctors to attend.
Due to
that, I have to postpone the talk which is held in the youth group on the topic of the side effects of smoking. Moving on, please accept my apology for the inconvenience to you. I know the staff of the youth group are very excited about my speech because
helps the youngsters to give up smoking and pay attention towards their health .
, one of my requests to you is if can we reschedule
speech on environment day which is coming after five days from 22 March 2023.
Along with
that, I
prepare some models which help the student to understand the cons of smoking not only to humans but
to the environment. I hope you will surely understand my issue and support me. Please let me know if you require any
information. My email ID is [email protected] I look forward to hearing from you soon. You Sincerely, Mr John
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