The traffic congestion is a growing problem in many cities today, what are some of the causes of traffic congestion, and what measures can be taken to help reduce it.

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Nowadays,
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of
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in the city tend to purchase
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rather than
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traffic
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congestion
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should take some policies to reduce
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the following paragraph.
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congestion
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often
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in the city,
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the fact that a large number of societies tend to buy new vehicle in order to make their activities easier and safe. In other
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avoid
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because it may create some
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activities for
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, in many
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are
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designed without any proper facilities
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the passengers.
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in the city occur because of
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of
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on the
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,
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user
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of
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are
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rise during the year.
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congestion
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, they can not choose any option
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. The most effective solution to overcome these issues
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through taking several
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by policy maker. First of all,
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should improve the quality of public
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by adding several facilities
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public
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, security, and CCTV.
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a passenger
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, and it may increase the number of citizens to
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public
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. Following
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steps, adding
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or
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on the
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is the appropriate solution
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can choose many options
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road
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when they are trapped
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traffic
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congestion
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. In conclusion, in many metropolitan areas,
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congestion
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is the main issue today,
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because
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many
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enjoy
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use
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private
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a private
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vehicle
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vehicles
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and lack of
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or
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on the
road
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, adding many facilities and
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the solution
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that should be taken by
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the government
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