The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart above depicts the research outcome on the distribution of visitors among different tourist spots in Britain in 1999. The values are calibrated in percentages.
Overall
, we can see that the theme
parks
were the most visited places among which Black pool pleasure beach proved to be the most popular.
In contrast
, wildlife
parks
and zoos were the least to be explored by tourists. People went to theme
parks
the majority about 38% in which 47% went to Black pool pleasure beach, 17% of them choose to go to Alton towers and 16 % visited Pleasure land Southport and only 10 % showed up to Legoland Windsor and Chessington world of adventure. Other tourist attractions like Museums and galleries
also
gain the attention of about 37% of the visitors
whereas
Historic houses and monuments and
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wildlife
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wild life
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parks
and zones were only visited by 16% and 9 % of people respectively
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