The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart above depicts the research outcome on the distribution of visitors among different tourist spots in Britain in 1999. The values are calibrated in percentages.

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, we can see that the theme

parks

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were the most visited places among which Black pool pleasure beach proved to be the most popular.

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, wildlife

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and zoos were the least to be explored by tourists. People went to theme

parks

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the majority about 38% in which 47% went to Black pool pleasure beach, 17% of them choose to go to Alton towers and 16 % visited Pleasure land Southport and only 10 % showed up to Legoland Windsor and Chessington world of adventure. Other tourist attractions like Museums and galleries

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gain the attention of about 37% of the visitors

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Historic houses and monuments and

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wildlife

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wild life

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wildlife

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parks

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and zones were only visited by 16% and 9 % of people respectively

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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

some people think that money makes a live comfortable while other believe that having a large amount of money brings more trouble do you think advantages of this outweigh disadvantages ?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

4/The demand for online coaching services and video courses has grown significantly in the digital age. Some now feel this method of learning is a superior option to in-person learning. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

You have had your computer repaired by your local computer supplier. You were extremely impressed with the service. Write a letter to the manager of the shop. Describe what happened when you call the shop. Praised the staff who helped you and ask the manager to thank those concerned.