You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months • say how your work could be done while you are away • ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Manager, My name is Ugha Tyui and I am a middle engineer in our company. I am writing

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letter to ask you about the opportunity to work in our head office in Canada for about six months. The reason I am asking about it is that I want to build stronger relationships with our authorities and develop my skills there.

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, I am considering the possibility to live in Canada so if the facilities suit me well there, I will do my best to move here. If you will face a problem finding another person in my place here, I can recommend you consider my colleague Mark Robinson who is very strong in programme development. I have taught him some useful things which will be necessary to help me with my work

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I am away. I would appreciate it if you helped me to organise my move to our head office.

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, I will wait for your instructions and suggestions about that situation. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ugha Tyui

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

178 words

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