The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table and charts illustrate the detail of the police's budget.
Moreover
, it shows how the finance received in English from 2017 to 2018. Overall
, in 2018 the total budget got more than in 2017 but a category also
spent on such
technology.
According to
2017, the biggest source was the National government, 175.5 m, ,,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
the lowest was other sources (eg grants).Add a comma
,however
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