Some people think it would be better for large companies and industries to move regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Most of the giant corporate offices are located in
the
urban locations Correct article usage
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while
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the call
a call
call
for Change the form of the verb
calling
the
different regions to be explored. Correct article usage
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This
has become a topic of discussion between masses around the world. It is understandable that most cities
have more amenities for companies
to run offices but some think otherwise
; they claim that this
leads to neglection
of the rural Correct article usage
the neglection
areas
.
For companies
to operate and prosper, alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
high quality
facilities are needed on a daily basis Add a hyphen
high-quality
such
as power, infrastructure, electricity and high speed
internet which ensures Add a hyphen
high-speed
high scale
productivity. Rural Add a hyphen
high-scale
areas
when compared to the big cities
have very little to offer in terms of these needs. It would take immense investment to upgrade infrastructure
of those downtrodden towns so that they can fit the basic needs of hosting gigantic corporates. Add an article
the infrastructure
In addition
to that, most cities
boast a huge population which extremely benefit
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benefits
the
organisations Correct article usage
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while
hiring employees with certain skills at ease.
Although
there are reasons to prefer cities
over towns, some complain that rural places should be given a chance to prosper as well. Presence
of Correct article usage
The presence
large scale
businesses in different places would create jobs and reduce the disparities in the incomes of people living in different Add a hyphen
large-scale
areas
. This
also
gives an opportunity for rural areas
to further
develop and prosper. Also
, the concentration of all the companies
in the same place would lead to excessive congestion and may potentially aggravate traffic on roads. There is indeed some reasoning behind the call for corporates to be considerate of the rural regions.
In conclusion, there are both pros as well cons of having companies
located in big cities
and towns alone but I strongly believe that since that since
most villages lack good infrastructure, there are more upsides for corporates to be established in big Remove the redundancy
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cities
rather than rural areas
.Submitted by Mohammed Danishuddin on
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