Some people think it would be better for large companies and industries to move regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Most of the giant corporate offices are located in
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urban locations
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for
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different regions to be explored.
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has become a topic of discussion between masses around the world. It is understandable that most
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have more amenities for
companies
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to run offices but some think
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; they claim that
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leads to
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of the rural
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. For
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to operate and prosper,
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facilities are needed on a daily basis
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as power, infrastructure, electricity and
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internet which ensures
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productivity. Rural
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when compared to the big
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have very little to offer in terms of these needs. It would take immense investment to upgrade
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of those downtrodden towns so that they can fit the basic needs of hosting gigantic corporates.
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to that, most
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boast a huge population which extremely
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organisations
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hiring employees with certain skills at ease.
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there are reasons to prefer
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over towns, some complain that rural places should be given a chance to prosper as well.
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businesses in different places would create jobs and reduce the disparities in the incomes of people living in different
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.
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gives an opportunity for rural
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to
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develop and prosper.
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, the concentration of all the
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in the same place would lead to excessive congestion and may potentially aggravate traffic on roads. There is indeed some reasoning behind the call for corporates to be considerate of the rural regions. In conclusion, there are both pros as well cons of having
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located in big
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and towns alone but I strongly believe that since
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most villages lack good infrastructure, there are more upsides for corporates to be established in big
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rather than rural
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