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The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams below show two methods of collecting water for irrigation purposes. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrate the ways people collect
water
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 from wells for
irrigation
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 treatment and from these channels to fields for farming.
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Diagram
 A shows how to collect
water
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 from
irrigation
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 manipulation to fields.
This
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 task is completed with a simple system built with a
basket
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 made of bamboo or leather and 4 ropes. These rules are tied with the sides of the
basket
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: 2 ropes aside and 2 others on the opposite side. There are two people standing next to a 1-2 metres depth
irrigation
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 channel. Each of them holds 2 jurisdictions connected to the
basket
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.
Next,
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they throw the
basket
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 into the channel to get the
water
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.
Finally
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, the
basket
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 is pulled up and moved towards the fields to force
water
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 inside it to come out. Different from the " Swing
basket
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" system, the "Rope and bucket" approach which is shown in diagram B uses an ox
instead
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 of two people.
Due to
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this
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 animal`s strength, the collected groundwater is up to fifty metres deep and it is collected from a well. "A bucket and pulley" system is used in
this
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 way. The ox is attached to the pulley, and the bucket rises from the well it walks downhill. Following that,
water
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 is put into
irrigation
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 channels.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 both methods are easy to carry on.
Nevertheless
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, the approach in diagram A relies on a different form of power from the mode in diagram B and the collected groundwater is from various depths.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, irrigation, basket with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 4 times.
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