Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Nowadays, a lot of seniors are taken
care
in
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of in
care
homes and nursing homes rather than in their home
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homes
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will address Correct your spelling
essay
about
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this
topic and discuss both merits and demerits.
To begin
with, staying in
out of Change preposition
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home
lessen Correct article usage
the home
familiy
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family
member's
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members'
burdans
and the pressure from looking after old Correct your spelling
burdens
burden
people
's health condition. Even though family
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the family
closest
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the closest
from
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to
people
, there is limitation
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a limitation
the limitation
at
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in
same
living place. Add an article
the same
a same
For example
, a senior who has crucial
disease cannot be Add an article
the crucial
controled
by family members who do not have medical Correct your spelling
controlled
skill
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skills
Hence
, putting old people
who need a
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care
in facility
that can support them has Add an article
a facility
a
significant value.
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apply
On the other hand
, leaving senior family members to public resources decrease their comfortability
and Replace the word
comfort
worsen
their medical condition in order to Correct subject-verb agreement
worsens
adopt
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adapt
new
environment. Especially, if the individual has lived in their Correct article usage
a new
home
with their family for long
time, changing Change the article
a long
thier
place to live Correct your spelling
their
impact
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impacts
thier
mental and physical condition. Correct your spelling
their
For instance
, as matter
of fact that Add an article
a matter
a
old guy who loved Change the article
an
home
and family had to leave the house and started living in care
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a care
home
passed away after he moved because he had stressed
out and Add a missing verb
been stressed
not
used to Add a missing verb
was not
be
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Therefore
, changing the old individuals
environment does not always promote their situation.
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individual's
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To conclude
, putting old
family Add an article
an old
member
in Fix the agreement mistake
members
medical
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a medical
care
facility
without taking Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
care
at home
has a value which can alliviate
the tasks that family members have toCorrect your spelling
alleviate
.
Meanwhile, there is Add a missing verb
do.
also
downside
that might distress the senior Add an article
the downside
a downside
people
because of new
living place without family.Correct article usage
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...