You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager, In your letter, -explain that you would like to apply for the job -give some details of any relevant experience that you have -specify the days and times that would suit you.

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun Lee; I visited your restaurant as a customer

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week, and I saw the advertisement for a part-time job in the window by chance. I have been looking for a business to work for a few weeks. If you are seeking the right candidate, please allocate me to the position. As I have been performing as a full-time chef for more than 5 years, working in your kitchen would not be challenging for me.

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I was working in a previous restaurant, I obtained RSA, and a hospitality diploma to cover front house staff tasks.

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. I am holding a commercial cookery certificate as well. I am willing to work the BOH and FOH sections of the restaurant flexibly if it is required. Currently, the available time that I can provide will be from Monday to Thursday. Since my wife is working Friday, Saturday, and Sunday, I need to look after our children during that time. Please feel free to ask me if you have any questions. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully , Injun Lee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

187 words

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