Write a letter to a friend expressing your interest to seek employment in a different country. Your letter should include: – Why you want to work in a different country – What type of work you will be looking for – Questions you have about working in a different country that your friend may be able to answer

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Dear Sir/Madam My name is Injun Lee; I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am willing to relocate to find a job from my current location, Brisbane, to Italy. A few weeks ago,

since

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I dropped by your workplace as a tourist, it was

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and fascinating experience that I was able to see how Italians work in a kitchen. Recently, as you know I have been working as a senior sous chef in my workplace for 6 years, I am looking for the same position in the BOH sector in Italy. If I can work in a pasta section rather than performing in a pizzeria, It will be perfect for me to settle down.

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, If you don’t mind, could you tell me how much I should prepare for

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and relocation

fee

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? I will move to the place by myself,

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, I wish you to explain the budget based on

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. If you have any questions or other concerns, please feel free to contact me anytime. Yours sincerely Injun Lee

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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