Some business find that their new employees lack in basic interpersonal skills such as the lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions? Also provide relevant examples from your experience.

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Nowadays, many

companies

faced some difficulties which are related to interpersonal skills between employees. They cannot

work

together as a team. There are some causes of

this

problem and resolutions how to solve them. Personally, I believe that these problems will be easily solved. So,

this

essay will examine

this

thought-provoking issue.

To begin

with , the fundamental concept of the lack of ability to

work

together is different people's perspectives on the world.

This

is the main source of all problems. It can be everything.

For instance

, individuals can admire different political leaders , clothes brands , influencers etc.

As a result

, they can have misunderstandings with each other and the desire to communicate will disappear.

In addition

, employees can be antisocial.

Hence

, it will be hard to make a normal connection with

this

group of people.

In addition

also

, it can hinge on

work

conditions.

For example

, my mum told me when she worked in the old, shabby office she did not

has

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the desire to

work

well and even she did not have the wish to communicate with her colleagues. It was caused by the fact that everything distracted and annoyed her.

However

, there are many resolutions to solve

this

issue.

Firstly

companies

have to provide good and calm conditions for their staff.

Also

companies

can arrange for their

workers

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worker's

workers'

show examples

different webinars and invite successful speakers in order to cultivate and alleviate social and teamwork skills.

Furthermore

companies

should make a careful selection of people when they recruit them to

work

. I mean they have to recognise does

this

person is argumentative , antisocial or not.

By way

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of conclusion, there are some solutions to

this

problem.

Companies

must help their workers enhance social and teamwork skills.

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Topic Vocabulary:

interpersonal skills
teamwork
collaborative skills
work-ready capabilities
practical skills
digital communication
peer interaction
mentoring
onboarding process
integration
isolation
curriculum development
internships
real-world experience
individual performance
group projects
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Some business find that their new employees lack in basic interpersonal skills such as the lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions? Also provide relevant examples from your experience.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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