The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten to much. Summarize the information by the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The three introduction
pie
charts represents
the differences Change the verb form
represent
proportion
with respect to nutrition substance (Change preposition
in proportion
sodium
, saturated fat, added sugar) in breakfast, lunch, dinner
and snack. At the first glance, the show flow charts describe the amount of intake with dinner
in a lot of meals is
the largest.
In the first Correct your spelling
as
pie
chart about sodium
, it can be clearly observe
that the proportion with Change the verb form
be clearly observed
dinner
take
the first place Change the verb form
takes
about
43%. And we can see that Change preposition
at about
she
Correct your spelling
the
snack
and breakfast have percentages of Correct subject-verb agreement
snacks
sodium
are
similar, both are small minorities. Correct pronoun usage
that are
In the
second Change preposition
The
pie
chart outlinesCorrect article usage
an
on
saturated fat. It is apparently seen that the Change preposition
to
content
in dinner
's saturated also
top
the list. And breakfast has similar Change the verb form
tops
content
in sodium
and saturated fat, lunch
has similar Correct word choice
and lunch
content
with these nutrition staff, too. Have almost roughly on
quarter.
Now turn in to the details in Correct your spelling
one
third
Add an article
a third
the third
pie
chart, the graph shows the datas
on added sugars and it's Correct your spelling
data
clean
from the data we know that snacks have the largest Correct your spelling
clear
content
, nearly around half.
In the end, acrossing
the three Correct your spelling
crossing
across
pie
charts, we know that the sodium
and saturated fat content
are the primary in dinner
, and snacks are occupied with added sugar. We have to keep balance
of nutrition for our health.Add an article
the balance
a balance
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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