There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Mr Joe, I, Kumarjeet Poddar,

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associated with Capgemini India and I reside in Mumbai, precisely Santacruz. So, I prefer

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to commute to my office location. Nowadays, I am facing some issues.

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, I would like to tell you that

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of buses

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not optimistic.

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, travelling from Santacruz to Airoli is

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tedious task for me but you have provided

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facilities and it is convenient for people like me but

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a few days, buses are not regular and it directly impacts

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working hours

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my office.

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, It has been seen that for two weeks

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has decreased.

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, I am unable to reach to

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office on the time.

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, I need to take

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route and it is too much

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. I would like to inform you that please check it personally because

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I have raised

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multiple times but your company does not

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any

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please take the necessary actions and please try to find reasons for

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. I hope that you will take some

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as soon as possible. yours faithfully, Kumarjeet Poddar

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
reliable
maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
unreliable
appointments

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