There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Mr Joe, I, Kumarjeet Poddar,

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associated with Capgemini India and I reside in Mumbai, precisely Santacruz. So, I prefer

bus

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to commute to my office location. Nowadays, I am facing some issues.

Hence

, I would like to tell you that

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of buses

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not optimistic.

Firstly

, travelling from Santacruz to Airoli is

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tedious task for me but you have provided

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facilities and it is convenient for people like me but

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a few days, buses are not regular and it directly impacts

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apply

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working hours

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my office.

Additionally

, It has been seen that for two weeks

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buses

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has decreased.

Due to

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, I am unable to reach to

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office on the time.

Therefore

, I need to take

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route and it is too much

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. I would like to inform you that please check it personally because

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I have raised

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multiple times but your company does not

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any

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.

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,

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please take the necessary actions and please try to find reasons for

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. I hope that you will take some

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as soon as possible. yours faithfully, Kumarjeet Poddar