The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved.
The pie chart illustrates the complaint sources againstbank of America is 63%.
thebank of America and the bar chart shows how much time was taken to solve the
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Overall, the highest percentage of complaints were filed by the public and the lowest
caseswere done by others.
Furthermore, over the period, on average, 4 to 6
monthswere needed from investigation to final action.
Firstly, the proportion of
caseslodged by the public against
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Thenthe number of
casesdone by government agencies and out of state is almost equal and the number is 11% and 10% respectively.
Moreover, 3% of complaints were filed by the media and others. 8% of complaint source is insurance companies.
However, in 2001, it took about 6
monthsfor the final action,
whilein 2001, it took the longest time and was exactly 6
months. After that, it dwindled slightly in 2002 and rose slightly again in 2003.
Finally, the least period was taken to resolve the
at the endof the period, which was a little more than 4
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