In many places, new homes are needed. But the only space for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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Nowadays is so hard to find a good apartment or a house in a city. Especially if you have a big family with small kids and pets.

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of living in cities like NY is so high and space so limited that people start to

chose

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living

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to live

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in the

countryside

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Buy

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a property in a small village is cheaper than

rent

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renting

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a tiny flat in

the

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busy city. You can build or buy a new spacious home in the

countryside

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for

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price. And you get not only a house but a lot of benefits that come with living near nature. Fresh air,

small

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community, more safety, and a lot of

countryside

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activities available for newcomers. More and more people enjoy

this

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type of country lifestyle. But

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the other hand, some people think that it

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bad idea to build new houses in the

countryside

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. They want to protect

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small communities, unique old-fashion architecture, and nature. I think that moving to the

countryside

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is an excellent idea.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

169 words

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Urbanization
Ecological benefits
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Carbon sequestration
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