The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart shows the process of making carbonated

drinks

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details

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. It

take

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takes

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step

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to step

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step

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to understand how it started until it

delivered

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was delivered

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to the stores.

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, the process goes over five stages each stage has

his

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its

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own approach to

complete

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completing

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it perfectly.

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with, carbonated

drinks

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are

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popular in our society and many consider

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them

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apply

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their favourite drink.

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does

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they know how the company produce It

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for

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storages

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storage

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? The first

step

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water

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is water

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cleaning which

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apply

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is raw the

water

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inside the filter to make it

more clean

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and without chemicals.

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this

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, the heating evaporation and carbonation when you add the carbon dioxide by electric heaters to the

water

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Following

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this

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is the most

importnat

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important

stage which mixing and in

this

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process by using colouring, syrup, and flavour the tank

mixed

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mixes

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water

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perfectly with the carbon dioxide.

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Last

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step

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the

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apply

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company production, is whether to put it in bottles or cans and

this

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is named

filtering

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the filtering

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and filling stage.

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the shipment

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is on

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the road to

deliever

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deliver

the carbonated

drinks

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to the supermarkets.

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this

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is how companies produce one of the famous

drinks

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in our meantime.

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, now choose your flavour and enjoy your drink

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words drinks, step, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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9
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

204 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Filtration
Water softening
Chemical treatment
Evaporation
Cooling pipe
Carbonation
Carbon dioxide
High pressure
Syrup
Flavor
Color
Stirring
Uniformity
Secondary filtration
Bottling
Canning
Packaging
Distribution
Retail outlets

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