The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart shows the process of making carbonated
drinks
in details
. It Fix the agreement mistake
detail
take
us Change the verb form
takes
step
by Add the particle
to step
step
to understand how it started until it delivered
to the stores. Add a missing verb
was delivered
Further
, the process goes over five stages each stage has his
own approach to Correct pronoun usage
its
complete
it perfectly.
Wrong verb form
completing
To begin
with, carbonated drinks
is
popular in our society and many consider Change the verb form
are
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
as
their favourite drink. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, does
they know how the company produce It Change the verb form
do
to
Change preposition
for
storages
? The first Fix the agreement mistake
storage
step
, water
cleaning which Add a missing verb
is water
it
is raw the Correct pronoun usage
apply
water
inside the filter to make it more clean
and without chemicals. Replace the words
cleaner
After
this
, the heating evaporation and carbonation when you add the carbon dioxide by electric heaters to the water
. Following
this
,
is the most Remove the comma
apply
importnat
stage which mixing and in Correct your spelling
important
this
process by using colouring, syrup, and flavour the tank mixed
Replace the word
mixes
water
perfectly with the carbon dioxide. Last
Change the article
The last
step
in the
company production, is whether to put it in bottles or cans and Correct article usage
apply
this
is named filtering
and filling stage. Correct article usage
the filtering
Finally
the shipment on
the road to Add a missing verb
is on
deliever
the carbonated Correct your spelling
deliver
drinks
to the supermarkets.
Finally
, this
is how companies produce one of the famous drinks
in our meantime. In addition
, now choose your flavour and enjoy your drinkSubmitted by a7mdzh on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words drinks, step, water with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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