Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that modern technology has played a crucial role in juveniles' lifestyles these days.

Although

some people propound that children should spend their

time

reading stories from a book rather than playing

games

or watching television.

This

essay will first discuss the phenomenon of

this

before elaborating on my notion. On the one hand, it is believed by many that reading anecdotes or stories is more beneficial to the young for some reasons. First and foremost, reading not only allows humans to learn something new but

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also

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us at the same

time

. To put it simply, it can be considered

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an eye-opening experience for

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being for ages, which is important because it

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our life in all aspects. In Japan,

for example

, Japanese students always read

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of texts,

such

as books or

newspaper

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,

while

commuting on the train because they are educated to be

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learning people.

Therefore

, it would be nice if adolescents read books

instead

of playing

games

or spending

time

in front of a television.

On the other hand

,

while

reading books seems to be more advantageous to children, playing

games

and watching TV

also

have their advantages.

In other words

, watching TV can help improve social skills and language

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at the same

time

as those young audiences need to listen and understand their favourite shows or cartoons. Another thing is that playing

games

should not be underestimated by the majority of citizens, as it

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to result in children's aggressive and anti-social

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. Scientifically speaking, it does assist the young to improve their motor skills and

decision making

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ability.

Moreover

, it makes the young interested in how

games

or the internet works, which leads to a better understanding of technology in the long run.

For instance

, some of the kids in my village are clearly showing their

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skills when it comes to participating in certain activities. In conclusion, even though some ponder that juveniles should read stories from a book rather than

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games

and being a potato couch in front of a television. I strongly disagree with

this

statement because they are able to gain advantageous outcomes after doing

such

activities.