The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth Schooll from 2006 to the present. Summarise the informatio­n by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparion where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth Schooll from 2006 to the present.

Summarise the informatio­n by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparion where relevant.
The chart provides information about the
number
of
books
in the library that students at Starmouth School read based on their gender from 2009 to 2012.
Overall
, male students
initially
read more than female pupils,
however
, the period ended up with girls eagerly reading more than boys. The
number
of publications read by female learners had a tendency to increase over the years,
whereas
books
flicked through by boys moderately declined in
number
. At the beginning of the period, in 2009, the
number
of
books
read by boys was 50,
whereas
girls only read nearly 30
books
.
Then
there was a gradual growth in
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the numbers
show examples
numbers
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of references both male and female pupils read in 2010. In 2011, male and female students read the same
number
of
books
. Later on, in 2012, the blue graph considerably climbed up to show that the
number
of
books
read by girls dramatically rose from 100 to 140.
In contrast
, there was a substantial drop in the
number
of publications looked through by male learners, from 100 to 80
books
, as the pink figure went down significantly
at the end
of the period.
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