The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth Schooll from 2006 to the present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparion where relevant.
The chart provides information about the
number
of Use synonyms
books
in the library that students at Starmouth School read based on their gender from 2009 to 2012.
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Overall
, male students Linking Words
initially
read more than female pupils, Linking Words
however
, the period ended up with girls eagerly reading more than boys. The Linking Words
number
of publications read by female learners had a tendency to increase over the years, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
books
flicked through by boys moderately declined in Use synonyms
number
.
At the beginning of the period, in 2009, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
books
read by boys was 50, Use synonyms
whereas
girls only read nearly 30 Linking Words
books
. Use synonyms
Then
there was a gradual growth in Linking Words
Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of references both male and female pupils read in 2010. In 2011, male and female students read the same Fix the agreement mistake
number
number
of Use synonyms
books
.
Later on, in 2012, the blue graph considerably climbed up to show that the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
books
read by girls dramatically rose from 100 to 140. Use synonyms
In contrast
, there was a substantial drop in the Linking Words
number
of publications looked through by male learners, from 100 to 80 Use synonyms
books
, as the pink figure went down significantly Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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