the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The bar chart provides
the
information on the distribution of weekly family income among key 8 areas in one country over a 50-year period of time.
In 1968 and 2018, the largest portion was spent on food and leisure respectively. The least expenditure had not changed over Correct article usage
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the
time which is fuel and power. The money spent on household goods remained Correct article usage
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same
for these 2 years. The amount spent on leisure Correct article usage
the same
had
doubled over the 50-year period time Unnecessary verb
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although
the clothing and footwear expenditure had reduced in half.
In 1968, the portions of income spent on housing and clothing and footwear were Linking Words
same
but in 2018, the housing expense had almost doubled Correct article usage
the same
eventhough
the clothing and footwear amount had reduced significantly.Correct your spelling
even though
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