Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter
for
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applying
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a job in your
restaurant
. My name is Harpinder Kaur. Recently, I
have
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completed my studies and started working
full time
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. Currently, I am working in a trucking company as an Administrative Assistant, but I am not satisfied
from
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my
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this
job. My work is in Delta British Columbia and I am living in Surrey. It takes me two and
half
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an hour to reach there.
Moreover
, I am not happy with my earnings as they just pay me $17 for an hour. Your
restaurant
, named
as
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Taco Del Mar,
which
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is situated in Surrey and near to my hometown, I would like to work there.
Also
, I have
an
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experience
of
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working there because I
was
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used to
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at a Mexican
restaurant
before when I was doing my studies.
Furthermore
, I am
available
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full time
working
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there and
also
I have
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excellent customer service experience. I may not need training.
This
restaurant
is close to my home, so will always be ready to come during rush hours. I am available to come
on
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an interview
in
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this
weekend
any
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time. Awaiting
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your response. Yours faithfully, Harpinder Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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