Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter: •explain what you are currently doing • describe your suitability for this area of work • say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter for
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to for
applying
a job in your Add the preposition
forapplying
restaurant
. My name is Harpinder Kaur. Recently, I have
completed my studies and started working Unnecessary verb
apply
full time
.
Currently, I am working in a trucking company as an Administrative Assistant, but I am not satisfied Add a hyphen
full-time
from
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with
my
Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
job. My work is in Delta British Columbia and I am living in Surrey. It takes me two and half
an hour to reach there. Correct article usage
a half
Moreover
, I am not happy with my earnings as they just pay me $17 for an hour.
Your restaurant
, named as
Taco Del Mar, Change preposition
apply
which
is situated in Surrey and near to my hometown, I would like to work there. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Also
, I have an
experience Correct article usage
apply
of
working there because I Change preposition
apply
was
used to Unnecessary verb
apply
work
at a Mexican Change the verb form
working
restaurant
before when I was doing my studies. Furthermore
, I am available
full time Add an article
an available
working
there and Replace the word
work
also
I have a an
excellent customer service experience. I may not need training. Choose an article
an
This
restaurant
is close to my home, so will always be ready to come during rush hours.
I am available to come on
an interview Change preposition
for
in
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apply
this
weekend any
time.
Awaiting Change preposition
at any
for
your response.
Yours faithfully,
Harpinder KaurChange preposition
apply
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite