The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram details how
the
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plastic
bottles
are
recyclyed
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recycled
.
Overall
, the recycling of
plastic
bottles
has nine steps starting from placing the
bottles
in the designated bin to
reproduce
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the products.
Firstly
, from the
data
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we can see that
the first step is
we need to put those
plastic
bottles
in recycle trash bin , and
then
it
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they
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will be transported to
recycling
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the recycling
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centre to sort the litter,
after
this
, all the
litters
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litter
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is
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are
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going to be squashed into blocks, and the fifth step is washing
this
litter after crushing it.
Next,
these
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washing litter is
manufaturing
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manufacturing
to
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plastic
pellets, and the
plastic
pellets will be put in high
tempurate
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temperature
temperate
machine to become raw material, the
last
step
is produce
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is producing
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our basic
necessties
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necessities
from raw
material
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materials
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like water
bottle
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bottles
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,
shirt
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shirts
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,
pencil
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pencils
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, and so on. The end products are placed in the designated bins once they get ripped up or used. It keeps the
plastic
recycling process keep going.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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