The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagram details how

the

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apply

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plastic

bottles

are

recyclyed

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recycled

Overall

, the recycling of

plastic

bottles

has nine steps starting from placing the

bottles

in the designated bin to

reproduce

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reproducing

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the products.

Firstly

, from the

data

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we can see that

the first step is

we need to put those

plastic

bottles

in recycle trash bin , and

then

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they

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will be transported to

recycling

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the recycling

a recycling

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centre to sort the litter,

after

this

, all the

litters

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litter

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are

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going to be squashed into blocks, and the fifth step is washing

this

litter after crushing it.

Next,

these

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this

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washing litter is

manufaturing

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manufacturing

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into

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plastic

pellets, and the

plastic

pellets will be put in high

tempurate

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temperature

temperate

machine to become raw material, the

last

step

is produce

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is producing

is produced

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our basic

necessties

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necessities

from raw

material

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materials

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like water

bottle

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bottles

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shirt

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shirts

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pencil

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pencils

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, and so on. The end products are placed in the designated bins once they get ripped up or used. It keeps the

plastic

recycling process keep going.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

160 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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