The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram details how
the
Correct article usage
apply
plastic
bottles
are recyclyed
.
Correct your spelling
recycled
Overall
, the recycling of plastic
bottles
has nine steps starting from placing the bottles
in the designated bin to reproduce
the products.
Wrong verb form
reproducing
Firstly
, from the data
we can see that Add a comma
,data
the first step is
we need to put those plastic
bottles
in recycle trash bin , and then
it
will be transported to Correct pronoun usage
they
recycling
centre to sort the litter, Add an article
the recycling
a recycling
after
this
, all the litters
Fix the agreement mistake
litter
is
going to be squashed into blocks, and the fifth step is washing Change the verb form
are
this
litter after crushing it.
Next,
these
washing litter is Correct determiner usage
this
manufaturing
Correct your spelling
manufacturing
to
Change preposition
into
plastic
pellets, and the plastic
pellets will be put in high tempurate
machine to become raw material, the Correct your spelling
temperature
temperate
last
step is produce
our basic Change the verb form
is producing
is produced
necessties
from raw Correct your spelling
necessities
material
like water Fix the agreement mistake
materials
bottle
, Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
shirt
, Fix the agreement mistake
shirts
pencil
, and so on.
The end products are placed in the designated bins once they get ripped up or used. It keeps the Fix the agreement mistake
pencils
plastic
recycling process keep going.Submitted by yiinn317 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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